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|Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas, my fellow labourers.
 
|Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas, my fellow labourers.
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|as do my fellow volunteers Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas.
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|"volunteers" more accurate than "labourers", and reverse ordering is more natural in English, and clarify that the others are joining in the greeting
 
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