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Epistle to Philemon (Translated) (view source)

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|Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas, my fellow labourers.
 
|Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas, my fellow labourers.
 
|as do my colleagues Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas.
 
|as do my colleagues Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas.
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|"volunteers" more accurate than "labourers", and reverse ordering is more natural in English, and clarify that the others are joining in the greeting
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|"colleagues" more accurate than "labourers" in this context, and reverse ordering is more natural in English; also clarify that the others are ''extending'' rather than receiving the greeting
 
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