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|Who knoweth the spirit of man that goeth upward, and the spirit of the beast that goeth downward to the earth?  
 
|Who knoweth the spirit of man that goeth upward, and the spirit of the beast that goeth downward to the earth?  
|Who knows that the Spirit of man returns to God while the spirit of God's animals goes down to the earth?
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|Who understands that the spirit of man returns to God while the spirit of God's animals goes down to the earth?
|"Who knows" is a little weak
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|Wherefore I perceive that there is nothing better, than that a man should rejoice in his own works; for that is his portion: for who shall bring him to see what shall be after him?  
 
|Wherefore I perceive that there is nothing better, than that a man should rejoice in his own works; for that is his portion: for who shall bring him to see what shall be after him?  
|At this I realized that there is nothing better than for a man to rejoice in his own work, for that is what he gets from it. No one can guarantee to bring him back to see what will become of them after he is gone.
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|At this I realized that there is nothing better than for a man to rejoice in his own works, for that is his time to make a difference: for who could bring him to the future to see what would follow his life?
 
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