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|To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven:  
 
|To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven:  
|There is a season and a time for everything in the earthly realm.
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|Every thing has its season, and a proper time for every purpose:
 
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|A time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted;  
 
|A time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted;  
|A time to be born, and another to die: a time to plant, and another to harvest;
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|A time to be born, and a time to die: a time to plant, and a time to harvest;
 
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|A time to kill, and a time to heal; a time to break down, and a time to build up;  
 
|A time to kill, and a time to heal; a time to break down, and a time to build up;  
|A time to Kill, and another to heal; a time to destroy, and another to build up;
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|A time to Kill, and a time to heal; a time to destroy, and a time to rebuild;
 
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|A time to weep, and a time to laugh; a time to mourn, and a time to dance;  
 
|A time to weep, and a time to laugh; a time to mourn, and a time to dance;  
|A time to weep, and another to laugh; a time to mourn, and another to rejoyce;
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|A time to weep, and a time to laugh; a time to mourn, and a time to dance;
 
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|A time to cast away stones, and a time to gather stones together; a time to embrace, and a time to refrain from embracing;  
 
|A time to cast away stones, and a time to gather stones together; a time to embrace, and a time to refrain from embracing;  
|A time to throw out stones, and another to gather them together; a time to embrace, and another to abstain;
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|A time to throw stones away, and a time to gather stones together; a time to embrace, and a time to refrain from embracing;
 
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|A time to get, and a time to lose; a time to keep, and a time to cast away;  
 
|A time to get, and a time to lose; a time to keep, and a time to cast away;  
|A time to get, and another to loose: a time to keep, and another to discard;
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|A time to get, and a time to lose; a time to keep, and a time to cast away;
 
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|A time to rend, and a time to sew; a time to keep silence, and a time to speak;  
 
|A time to rend, and a time to sew; a time to keep silence, and a time to speak;  
|A time to tear, and another to sew; a time to be silent, and another to speak;
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|A time to tear, and a time to sew; a time to be silent, and a time to speak;
 
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|A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war, and a time of peace.  
 
|A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war, and a time of peace.  
|A time to love, and another to hate: A time for war, and another for peace.
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|A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war, and a time of peace.
 
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|I have seen the travail, which God hath given to the sons of men to be exercised in it.  
 
|I have seen the travail, which God hath given to the sons of men to be exercised in it.  
|I have seen the trying ordeal that God gave to the sons of men to make them work.
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|I have seen the ordeals that God has given to the sons of men to make them stronger.
 
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|He hath made every thing beautiful in his time: also he hath set the world in their heart, so that no man can find out the work that God maketh from the beginning to the end.  
 
|He hath made every thing beautiful in his time: also he hath set the world in their heart, so that no man can find out the work that God maketh from the beginning to the end.  
|He made everything beautiful before he gave the Earth to man, he set this world in mans heart, so that man could discover the work that God did to make it beautiful.
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|He has made everything beautiful in His time: He has also placed an appreciation for the world in their hearts, so that men would not simply regard God's works dispassionately.
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|Not sure about his one, but it seems to capture the meaning
 
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|I know that there is no good in them, but for a man to rejoice, and to do good in his life.  
 
|I know that there is no good in them, but for a man to rejoice, and to do good in his life.  
|I know that they are no good at all, except for making men rejoice, and doing so all their lives.
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|I know that there is no good in this, but for a man to rejoice, and to do good in his life.
 
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|And also that every man should eat and drink, and enjoy the good of all his labour, it is the gift of God.  
 
|And also that every man should eat and drink, and enjoy the good of all his labour, it is the gift of God.  
|Every man should labor and every man that labors should eat and drink and enjoy those fruits, enjoying the fruits of your labor is a gift from God.
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|And also that every man should eat and drink, and enjoy the good of all his works, for it is the gift of God.  
|Considerably changed this passage, but I think I delivered the point
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|I know that, whatsoever God doeth, it shall be for ever: nothing can be put to it, nor any thing taken from it: and God doeth it, that men should fear before him.  
 
|I know that, whatsoever God doeth, it shall be for ever: nothing can be put to it, nor any thing taken from it: and God doeth it, that men should fear before him.  
|I know that what God does is done forever. Nothing can be added to or taken away from God's works. God does this so that man should fear him.
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|I know that whatever God does, it shall be done forever: Nothing can be added to it, nor anything taken away from it:  and God does this so that men should fear him.
 
|I do not know if I quite got hold of this one
 
|I do not know if I quite got hold of this one
 
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|That which hath been is now; and that which is to be hath already been; and God requireth that which is past.  
 
|That which hath been is now; and that which is to be hath already been; and God requireth that which is past.  
|The way things were is the way things are now. The future will be like the past too, God requires things to stay as they were.
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|The way things were is the way things are now. The future will be like the past too; God requires this consistency.
 
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|And moreover I saw under the sun the place of judgment, that wickedness was there; and the place of righteousness, that iniquity was there.  
 
|And moreover I saw under the sun the place of judgment, that wickedness was there; and the place of righteousness, that iniquity was there.  
|I saw an earthly place of judgement, were wickedness could be found, and a place of righteousness where Gross injustice could be seen.
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|And I also saw an earthly place of judgment, that wickedness was there; and at the place of righteousness, that injustice was there.
 
|No stock can be put in earthly things, even those which appear to be most just can and do harbor wickedness
 
|No stock can be put in earthly things, even those which appear to be most just can and do harbor wickedness
 
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|I said in mine heart, God shall judge the righteous and the wicked: for there is a time there for every purpose and for every work.  
 
|I said in mine heart, God shall judge the righteous and the wicked: for there is a time there for every purpose and for every work.  
|I realized that God will judge the righteous and the wicked, there is a time there for every purpose and every work.  
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|I said to myself that God will judge the righteous and the wicked: for there is a time there for every purpose and every work.  
 
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|I said in mine heart concerning the estate of the sons of men, that God might manifest them, and that they might see that they themselves are beasts.  
 
|I said in mine heart concerning the estate of the sons of men, that God might manifest them, and that they might see that they themselves are beasts.  
|I realized that to wealth of the sons of men, that God might give it to them, so that they might see that they are just another of God's animals.
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|I realized that where the material trappings of men were concerned, that God might expose them for what they are, so man would realize that when they are taken away they are as the other animals of His creation.
|I changed beasts to God's animals because beast has picked up a connotation of brutishness since the time of the KJV. I didn't want to just say animal because that might give the wrong impression, I also figured I could get away with adding an extra "God" to the CBP.
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|I revised this, because it seems like the original point is that God occasionally needs to humble us, so we see our proper place as one of His living creations.
 
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|For that which befalleth the sons of men befalleth beasts; even one thing befalleth them: as the one dieth, so dieth the other; yea, they have all one breath; so that a man hath no preeminence above a beast: for all is vanity.  
 
|For that which befalleth the sons of men befalleth beasts; even one thing befalleth them: as the one dieth, so dieth the other; yea, they have all one breath; so that a man hath no preeminence above a beast: for all is vanity.  
|For the sons of men will meet the same fate as all of God's animal, even one thing happens to them, as one dies so does the other. They all breath, Man has no prestige over the rest of God's animals. All is vanity.
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|For that which happens to man happens to all His living creations; the same fate falls to them: as one dies, so does the other; yes, they all carry the breath of life;  in that a man is no different that any of the animals created by God. For all is vanity.
|I took preeminence to mean prestige because God gave man dominion over the animals in Genesis.
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|All go unto one place; all are of the dust, and all turn to dust again.  
 
|All go unto one place; all are of the dust, and all turn to dust again.  
|All of them go to one place, All of them are made from dust and all of them will become dust.
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|All of them go to the same place; all of them are made from dust, and all of them will become dust again.
 
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