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In the section titled "Cuban Revolution," the entry reads "'''In 1955, a hobo living Guevara met Raul  and Fidel Castro...'''" This wording doesn't sound correct to me. I don't know much about Guevara at any point in his life, but is this meant to imply that he was living as a hobo when he met the Castro brothers? If so, could it be changed to something like "'''In 1955, while living as a hobo, Guevara met Raul and Fidel Castro...'''" etc. I assume that this isn't vandalism, since the article is locked to prevent it, but as I said, I don't know nearly enough about Guevara to accurately say whether or not he was a hobo. In Christ, [[User:Tzoran|Tyler Zoran]] 21:45, 18 March 2010 (EDT)

In the section titled "Cuban Revolution," the entry reads "'''In 1955, a hobo living Guevara met Raul  and Fidel Castro...'''" This wording doesn't sound correct to me. I don't know much about Guevara at any point in his life, but is this meant to imply that he was living as a hobo when he met the Castro brothers? If so, could it be changed to something like "'''In 1955, while living as a hobo, Guevara met Raul and Fidel Castro...'''" etc. I assume that this isn't vandalism, since the article is locked to prevent it, but as I said, I don't know nearly enough about Guevara to accurately say whether or not he was a hobo. In Christ, [[User:Tzoran|Tyler Zoran]] 21:45, 18 March 2010 (EDT)

:No problem.  Good suggestion.  [[User:RobSmith|Rob Smith]] 21:55, 18 March 2010 (EDT)

:No problem.  Good suggestion.  [[User:RobSmith|Rob Smith]] 21:55, 18 March 2010 (EDT)