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|Hear me now therefore, O ye children, and depart not from the words of my mouth.
|Hear me now therefore, O ye children, and depart not from the words of my mouth.
|Hear me now, O you children, and don't depart from the words of my mouth.
|Hear me now, O you children, and don't depart from the words of my mouth,
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|Lest thou give thine honour unto others, and thy years unto the cruel:
|Lest thou give thine honour unto others, and thy years unto the cruel:
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|dont give your honour to others, or your years to the cruel,
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|Lest strangers be filled with thy wealth; and thy labours be in the house of a stranger;
|Lest strangers be filled with thy wealth; and thy labours be in the house of a stranger;
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|let not strangers be filled with your wealth or your labours be in the house of a stranger,
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|I was almost in all evil in the midst of the congregation and assembly.
|I was almost in all evil in the midst of the congregation and assembly.
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|i was almost in all evil in the presence of the congregation and the assembly.
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|Drink waters out of thine own cistern, and running waters out of thine own well.
|Drink waters out of thine own cistern, and running waters out of thine own well.
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|Drink your own collected waters, and running waters out of your own well.
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|Original KJV uses the word cistern which is a receptacle for collecting and storing rain water etc. collected waters is better for communicating the point in the modern english.
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|Let them be only thine own, and not strangers' with thee.
|Let them be only thine own, and not strangers' with thee.
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|let them be only your own and not with strangers.
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|Let thy fountain be blessed: and rejoice with the wife of thy youth.
|Let thy fountain be blessed: and rejoice with the wife of thy youth.
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|Let your fountain be blessed and rejoice with the wife of your youth.
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|in the context of rejoicing with ones wife "fountain" can be "interpreted" in more then one way.
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|Let her be as the loving hind and pleasant roe; let her breasts satisfy thee at all times; and be thou ravished always with her love.
|Let her be as the loving hind and pleasant roe; let her breasts satisfy thee at all times; and be thou ravished always with her love.
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|let her be as the loving hind and the pleasant roe, let her breasts satisfy you at all times, be ravished always always with her love
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|And why wilt thou, my son, be ravished with a strange woman, and embrace the bosom of a stranger?
|And why wilt thou, my son, be ravished with a strange woman, and embrace the bosom of a stranger?
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|and will you, my son, be ravished with a strange woman and embrace the bosom of a stranger?
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|For the ways of man are before the eyes of the LORD, and he pondereth all his goings.
|For the ways of man are before the eyes of the LORD, and he pondereth all his goings.
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|For the ways of man are in front of the eyes of the LORD, and he ponders all his ways.
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|He shall die without instruction; and in the greatness of his folly he shall go astray.
|He shall die without instruction; and in the greatness of his folly he shall go astray.
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|He shall die without correction, and in his great foolishness he will go astray.
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