This subject is nowhere near my area of expertise or interest really, but these are a few things that pop out at me. I read the article because I noticed it was nominated for a featured article. Good luck! --[[User:SharonW|SharonW]] 19:35, 28 July 2011 (EDT) | This subject is nowhere near my area of expertise or interest really, but these are a few things that pop out at me. I read the article because I noticed it was nominated for a featured article. Good luck! --[[User:SharonW|SharonW]] 19:35, 28 July 2011 (EDT) |