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== Page needs to be rewritten. ==
 
== Page needs to be rewritten. ==
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I feel like this page focuses far too much on the liberal media's ideas about Bachman, and has little to do with Bachman herself. Would anyone object if we were to edit it to include more detailed information about Bachman and her views--[[User:SteveY|SteveY]] 09:33, 17 August 2011 (EDT)
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I feel like this page focuses far too much on the liberal media's ideas about Bachmann, and has little to do with Bachmann herself. Would anyone object if we were to edit it to include more detailed information about Bachmann and her views--[[User:SteveY|SteveY]] 09:33, 17 August 2011 (EDT)
    
:The criticism section doesn't seem all that long, but I'm sure the page could benefit from more on Bachmann's beliefs. Please do add any relevant information that isn't there already.--[[User:CPalmer|CPalmer]] 09:22, 17 August 2011 (EDT)
 
:The criticism section doesn't seem all that long, but I'm sure the page could benefit from more on Bachmann's beliefs. Please do add any relevant information that isn't there already.--[[User:CPalmer|CPalmer]] 09:22, 17 August 2011 (EDT)
    
::One of the first edit's I would like to make is to remove most of the last paragraph in the first section as it lacks any kind of citations, and should be placed in the liberal criticism's section. Want to run it by everyone here before going about doing it as I know that removing information can rub some members here the wrong way.--[[User:SteveY|SteveY]] 09:33, 17 August 2011 (EDT)
 
::One of the first edit's I would like to make is to remove most of the last paragraph in the first section as it lacks any kind of citations, and should be placed in the liberal criticism's section. Want to run it by everyone here before going about doing it as I know that removing information can rub some members here the wrong way.--[[User:SteveY|SteveY]] 09:33, 17 August 2011 (EDT)
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