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:::No, I don't know whether the Lord chose to act instantaneously, or whether there was a (short) delay. And I think that such a question should be answered ''after'' translating the verse, as we don't want to fit the translation to our explanations or expectations!  
 
:::No, I don't know whether the Lord chose to act instantaneously, or whether there was a (short) delay. And I think that such a question should be answered ''after'' translating the verse, as we don't want to fit the translation to our explanations or expectations!  
 
::[[User:AugustO|AugustO]] 11:36, 2 May 2011 (EDT)
 
::[[User:AugustO|AugustO]] 11:36, 2 May 2011 (EDT)
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== Ἐν ἀρχῇ ἦν ὁ λόγος, καὶ ὁ λόγος ἦν πρὸς τὸν θεόν, καὶ θεὸς ἦν ὁ λόγος. ==
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Read it aloud: That's pure beauty. Look at the parallel structure of Ἐν ἀρχῇ ἦν ὁ λόγος and then καὶ θεὸς ἦν ὁ λόγος (which puts God and ''the beginning'' in the same place), while we have a chiasmus  in the middle.
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The translated verse lacks these artistic qualities:
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''In the beginning was the Truth; its Word was with God; its Perfection was God.''
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At the very least it should be
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''In the beginning was the Truth and  its Word was with God and God was its Perfection.''
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But both times God just seems to be an aspect of ''the Truth'', just a part of the beginning...
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Is there anybody besides the translator who thinks that the sentence above is at least as meaningful and beautiful as the verse:
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''In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God.''
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[[User:AugustO|AugustO]] 16:20, 20 November 2011 (EST)
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