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→‎Chapter 24: As He dined with them, He took the bread, blessed and broke it [as Jesus had done], and handed it to them.
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|And it came to pass, as he sat at meat with them, he took bread, and blessed it, and brake, and gave to them.
 
|And it came to pass, as he sat at meat with them, he took bread, and blessed it, and brake, and gave to them.
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|As He sat at dinner with them, He took bread, and blessed it, and divided it, and gave to them.
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|As He dined with them, He took the bread, blessed and broke it [as Jesus had done], and handed it to them.
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|use of brackets is disfavored, but leaving in for now while awaiting an articulation that captures the original meaning best
 
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|And their eyes were opened, and they knew him; and he vanished out of their sight.
 
|And their eyes were opened, and they knew him; and he vanished out of their sight.
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|And their eyes were opened, and they recognized Him; and then He disappeared from their sight.
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|This opened their eyes, and they recognized Him; whereupon He disappeared from their sight.
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|The opening metaphor is too good to alter.
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|active voice is preferred today rather than the passive voice
 
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