:Terrific essay - very strong opening and a near-perfect closing. Substance: 9.8. On technical merit this essay is quite good also: 9.7.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 21:25, 7 February 2012 (EST) | :Terrific essay - very strong opening and a near-perfect closing. Substance: 9.8. On technical merit this essay is quite good also: 9.7.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 21:25, 7 February 2012 (EST) |