Talk:Atheism, agnosticism and pessimism

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Flow

You have a lot of interesting quotes here, and I did learn a little by reading through it. However, if you'll accept a little criticism in the nature it's intended, I do have one suggestion. It seems that this doesn't flow very well, and is essentially devoid of any form of transition from one section or topic to another. It would probably benefit from some work in this area. Also, someone not as familiar with the topic might not recognize a name which is mentioned. While they can gather the person's stance based on the content, might a few introductions also be an asset? I am not as well versed in the subject as you, so I hesitate to make such changes myself, but perhaps you have some ideas? --David B (talk) 00:11, 11 May 2016 (EDT)

Thanks. I implemented some of the input you gave me. Conservative (talk) 02:27, 11 May 2016 (EDT)
Your input also prompted me to integrate the article in other areas of the wiki where it was appropriate to do so. Thanks again. Conservative (talk) 08:25, 11 May 2016 (EDT)
Alright, glad to hear it--you're welcome! This does seem to flow better now. Thanks! --David B (talk) 13:41, 11 May 2016 (EDT)