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Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, citations would be agood idea to prove that what you say is true, and give credit to others if you got the info from them | Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, citations would be agood idea to prove that what you say is true, and give credit to others if you got the info from them | ||
Again, nice job! --[[User:DavidB4|David B]] ([[User talk:DavidB4|talk]]) 16:24, 5 March 2016 (EST) | Again, nice job! --[[User:DavidB4|David B]] ([[User talk:DavidB4|talk]]) 16:24, 5 March 2016 (EST) | ||
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| + | :In reading through this, it sounds more like an Essay. If you want, you can probably leave this as it is, but if you want to protect it from the edits of others, you could ask an admin like [[User:Conservative|Conservative]] or [[User:Jpatt|Jpatt]] to change the tile of this to "Essay:Declaration of Independence from Liberalism" This would mark it as a personal work from you, that you would like people to avoid editing. Have a great day! --[[User:DavidB4|David B]] ([[User talk:DavidB4|talk]]) 16:35, 5 March 2016 (EST) | ||
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Thanks! Just a few thoughts:
Interesting article--thanks! Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, citations would be agood idea to prove that what you say is true, and give credit to others if you got the info from them Again, nice job! --David B (talk) 16:24, 5 March 2016 (EST)
- In reading through this, it sounds more like an Essay. If you want, you can probably leave this as it is, but if you want to protect it from the edits of others, you could ask an admin like Conservative or Jpatt to change the tile of this to "Essay:Declaration of Independence from Liberalism" This would mark it as a personal work from you, that you would like people to avoid editing. Have a great day! --David B (talk) 16:35, 5 March 2016 (EST)