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Talk:Essay: The Special Interests Candidate (view source)
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:::If I correct, will it get your approval to stay?-- [[Image:50 star flag.png|14px]] [[User:Jpatt|jp]] 14:18, 20 September 2008 (EDT)
:::If I correct, will it get your approval to stay?-- [[Image:50 star flag.png|14px]] [[User:Jpatt|jp]] 14:18, 20 September 2008 (EDT)
::::It doesn't '''need''' ''my'' "approval" to stay. My points were merely to address the grammatical quality and internal integrity of the essay itself. If you choose to make corrections (with or without taking my advice) it will be a better essay. If you choose to leave it as it is, this is your choice. It will (likely) remain here and still be linked directly with the [[Barack Obama]] article. One would certainly hope that you would put forth your very best effort to convey your thoughts. [[User talk:MargeryCampbell|Marge]] 15:45, 20 September 2008 (EDT)
::::It doesn't '''need''' ''my'' "approval" to stay. My points were merely to address the grammatical quality and internal integrity of the essay itself. If you choose to make corrections (with or without taking my advice) it will be a better essay. If you choose to leave it as it is, this is your choice. It will (likely) remain here and still be linked directly with the [[Barack Obama]] article. One would certainly hope that you would put forth your very best effort to convey your thoughts. [[User talk:MargeryCampbell|Marge]] 15:45, 20 September 2008 (EDT)
:::::I'm disappointed by Marge's response, but she is correct in that the article doesn't require her approval. I very much hope that Jpatt will continue to work on it, urge him to do so, and look forward (not too presumptuously, I hope) to reading a polished version. As a minor point, I am 'Mr' rather than a 'Mrs'. [[User:Bugler|Bugler]] 16:00, 20 September 2008 (EDT)