Talk:Pro-immigration decisions

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I would recommend either changing the title or article's leading sentence, as the process of immigration is distinct from illegally crossing a nation's border. The leading sentence may lead some readers to misconstrue immigrants with illegal aliens. —LTMay D.C., his mother, and I.S. be all well! Tuesday, 23:51, August 9, 2021 (EDT)

Thanks, I revised the introduction accordingly.--Andy Schlafly (talk) 14:05, August 10, 2021 (EDT)
Thank you, that's a significant improvement. I still would personally prefer the title moved to reflect the article's implied points, though I do appreciate your copyedit as I recommended. —LTMay D.C., his mother, and I.S. be all well! Tuesday, 14:16, August 10, 2021 (EDT)