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|For we have great joy and consolation in thy love, because the bowels of the saints are refreshed by thee, brother. | |For we have great joy and consolation in thy love, because the bowels of the saints are refreshed by thee, brother. | ||
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Revision as of 02:44, August 16, 2009
The Epistle to Philemon is a letter written by Paul from prison, probably in A.D. 63 when Paul was in jail in Rome. It is Paul's shortest letter in the Bible, in which he asks a Christian slaveowner (Philemon) to be merciful toward a runaway slave (Onesimus) who also accepted Christ.
| Verse | King James Version | Proposed Conservative Translation | Analysis |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Paul, a prisoner of Jesus Christ, and Timothy our brother, unto Philemon our dearly beloved, and fellowlabourer, | Paul, in prison for Jesus Christ, and our brother Timothy, say to our friend and fellow volunteer Philemon, | "fellowlabourer" is misleading today, and falsely connotes socialism |
| 2 | And to our beloved Apphia, and Archippus our fellow soldier, and to the church in thy house: | And to dear Apphia and our colleague Archippus, and to your home church | "fellow soldier" needs a conservative update |
| 3 | Grace to you, and peace, from God our Father and the Lord Jesus Christ. | God's grace to you, and peace of mind, from our Father and the Lord Jesus Christ. | "peace" today means anti-war; "peace of mind" is what this means |
| 4 | I thank my God, making mention of thee always in my prayers, | Thanks be to God, as my prayers always do, | "I" is avoided in modern style; also, conservative style is concise |
| 5 | Hearing of thy love and faith, which thou hast toward the Lord Jesus, and toward all saints; | hearing of your love and faith toward the Lord Jesus and all saints | less arcane, more concise |
| 6 | That the communication of thy faith may become effectual by the acknowledging of every good thing which is in you in Christ Jesus. | That sharing your faith may be effective through acknowledging that every good thing comes from Christ Jesus. | not much needed here, except conciseness |
| 7 | For we have great joy and consolation in thy love, because the bowels of the saints are refreshed by thee, brother. | For we enjoy great joy and comfort from your love, because the hearts of believers are cheered by you, my brother. | fine-tuning here |
| 8 | Wherefore, though I might be much bold in Christ to enjoin thee that which is convenient, | ||
| 9 | Yet for love's sake I rather beseech thee, being such an one as Paul the aged, and now also a prisoner of Jesus Christ. | ||
| 10 | I beseech thee for my son Onesimus, whom I have begotten in my bonds: | I beg you on behalf of my convert Onesimus, to whom I successfully witnessed while imprisoned; | "son" means convert; begotten means "successfully witnessed"; bonds means in jail; otherwise it falsely looks like Paul fathered a child |
| 11 | Which in time past was to thee unprofitable, but now profitable to thee and to me: | ||
| 12 | Whom I have sent again: thou therefore receive him, that is, mine own bowels: | ||
| 13 | Whom I would have retained with me, that in thy stead he might have ministered unto me in the bonds of the gospel: | ||
| 14 | But without thy mind would I do nothing; that thy benefit should not be as it were of necessity, but willingly. | ||
| 15 | For perhaps he therefore departed for a season, that thou shouldest receive him for ever; | ||
| 16 | Not now as a servant, but above a servant, a brother beloved, specially to me, but how much more unto thee, both in the flesh, and in the Lord? | ||
| 17 | If thou count me therefore a partner, receive him as myself. | ||
| 18 | If he hath wronged thee, or oweth thee ought, put that on mine account; | ||
| 19 | I Paul have written it with mine own hand, I will repay it: albeit I do not say to thee how thou owest unto me even thine own self besides. | ||
| 20 | Yea, brother, let me have joy of thee in the Lord: refresh my bowels in the Lord. | ||
| 21 | Having confidence in thy obedience I wrote unto thee, knowing that thou wilt also do more than I say. | ||
| 22 | But withal prepare me also a lodging: for I trust that through your prayers I shall be given unto you. | ||
| 23 | There salute thee Epaphras, my fellow prisoner in Christ Jesus; | Epaphras, a colleague in prison for Christ Jesus, sends his best wishes; | The "salute" has militaristic connotations today, and the "fellow prisoner" really means "colleague in prison" |
| 24 | Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas, my fellowlabourers. | as do my colleagues Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas. | "colleagues" more accurate than "labourers" in this context, and reverse ordering is more natural in English; also clarify that the others are extending rather than receiving the greeting |
| 25 | The grace of our Lord Jesus Christ be with your spirit. Amen. | May the grace of our Lord Jesus Christ be with you. Amen. | "your spirit" is anachronistic today. |