::::I didn't make any changes for one main reason. Since the article needs more than simple spelling or grammar fixes, it would need to be rearranged and rewritten. I suspect that if I did what I think would make this article better my changes would be reverted, since I would probably dilute the perspective it is written from. I didn't fix the "all ... above" thing because I thought it might have been a direct quote from somewhere. I usually do make corrections when I see them needed, in fact I did some work on one of Mr. Schlafly's History Lectures. I don't think pointing out that something that I would never bother to work needs serious work is "complaining", and I have started ''many'' articles on CP in my year and a half here. But, sorry if I offended... [[User:Human|Human]] 18:32, 29 August 2008 (EDT) | ::::I didn't make any changes for one main reason. Since the article needs more than simple spelling or grammar fixes, it would need to be rearranged and rewritten. I suspect that if I did what I think would make this article better my changes would be reverted, since I would probably dilute the perspective it is written from. I didn't fix the "all ... above" thing because I thought it might have been a direct quote from somewhere. I usually do make corrections when I see them needed, in fact I did some work on one of Mr. Schlafly's History Lectures. I don't think pointing out that something that I would never bother to work needs serious work is "complaining", and I have started ''many'' articles on CP in my year and a half here. But, sorry if I offended... [[User:Human|Human]] 18:32, 29 August 2008 (EDT) |