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:::Human, trying being more humane instead of publicly complaining. Why don't you make the needed corrections, contribute more new articles and move on. Your attitude is proving valid with #15 and #20 of [[Essay:Liberal_Behavior_on_Conservapedia]]. -- [[Image:50 star flag.png|14px]] [[User:Jpatt|jp]] 17:27, 29 August 2008 (EDT)

:::Human, trying being more humane instead of publicly complaining. Why don't you make the needed corrections, contribute more new articles and move on. Your attitude is proving valid with #15 and #20 of [[Essay:Liberal_Behavior_on_Conservapedia]]. -- [[Image:50 star flag.png|14px]] [[User:Jpatt|jp]] 17:27, 29 August 2008 (EDT)

::::I didn't make any changes for one main reason.  Since the article needs more than simple spelling or grammar fixes, it would need to be rearranged and rewritten.  I suspect that if I did what I think would make this article better my changes would be reverted, since I would probably dilute the perspective it is written from.  I didn't fix the "all ... above" thing because I thought it might have been a direct quote from somewhere.  I usually do make corrections when I see them needed, in fact I did some work on one of Mr. Schlafly's History Lectures.  I don't think pointing out that something that I would never bother to work needs serious work is "complaining", and I have started ''many'' articles on CP in my year and a half here.  But, sorry if I offended... [[User:Human|Human]] 18:32, 29 August 2008 (EDT)

::::I didn't make any changes for one main reason.  Since the article needs more than simple spelling or grammar fixes, it would need to be rearranged and rewritten.  I suspect that if I did what I think would make this article better my changes would be reverted, since I would probably dilute the perspective it is written from.  I didn't fix the "all ... above" thing because I thought it might have been a direct quote from somewhere.  I usually do make corrections when I see them needed, in fact I did some work on one of Mr. Schlafly's History Lectures.  I don't think pointing out that something that I would never bother to work on needs serious work is "complaining", and I have started ''many'' articles on CP in my year and a half here.  But, sorry if I offended... [[User:Human|Human]] 18:32, 29 August 2008 (EDT)

:::::I have cleaned up the grammar but the "facts" I'll leave to the more intrepid editors. [[User talk:MargeryCampbell|Marge]] 19:44, 29 August 2008 (EDT)

:::::I have cleaned up the grammar but the "facts" I'll leave to the more intrepid editors. [[User talk:MargeryCampbell|Marge]] 19:44, 29 August 2008 (EDT)